One fine day I was walking along a path in the park. I was just going from school back home. The sun was shining on my face and the cool breeze was flowing across my body. My ears were hearing the rustling leaves speaking to me, while the roses sweet fragrant smell drifted up to my nose.
As I was walking through a tree tunnel everything got darker and darker until it looked like midnight!Suddenly I saw something very faint move. I heard quiet footsteps drawing closer and closer, then I felt something touch me. Then a small whisper said ''Don't turn around.'' I got quite scared and ran and ran. I saw a flickering light around the corner and followed it and it took me back in the sunlight. I kept on walking and I heard a small giggle and turned around but no one was there.
I looked behind a rosebush and found that Scarlet, Madeline, Tally and Mrs N was hiding there! ''Suprise!!!'' They all shouted. "We wanted you to come this way so we had to lead you here." All afternoon we played and played till it was dinnertime.
The End
A story by S.S Please leave a comment Thanks! Bye!!!
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16 comments:
fantastic!
Scary!!!
From IY rm 20
very interesting SS!I like the way you described what was all around you! V.S
wow i condt belive my eyes when i read that story it was en belive a bell from E.M
wow!!!!!!!!
R.L
hi!!!
fantastic story.
i thought it was a bit scary don't
you.
eny way wonderful story.
r.l
what a wonderful story!E.W.
I love your photograph. Where was it taken ?
PNK
I loved your story. I was quite scared, actually feeling like I was there!
wow what a wonderful story. CB Rm20
WOW amazing blog but my most favourite thing on the blog was the daily puppy CuTE by l.c
LOVE your blog l.c
I love your story and the picture. I think this class has fun and awesome kids. RVDM R21
Great story, I love the picture of the tree tunnel as well.
wowwww i love it s.s
love the tunnel
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