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Tuesday, March 29, 2011

I Turned Around and Nobody Was There!!!

One fine day I was walking along a path in the park. I was just going from school back home. The sun was shining on my face and the cool breeze was flowing across my body. My ears were hearing the rustling leaves speaking to me, while the roses sweet fragrant smell drifted up to my nose.

 As I was walking through a tree tunnel everything got darker and darker until it looked like midnight!Suddenly I saw something very faint move. I heard quiet footsteps drawing closer and closer, then I felt something touch me. Then a small whisper said ''Don't turn around.''  I got quite scared and ran and ran. I saw a flickering light around the corner and followed it and it took me back in the sunlight. I kept on walking and I heard a small giggle and turned around but no one was there.

 I looked behind a rosebush and  found that Scarlet, Madeline, Tally and Mrs N was hiding there! ''Suprise!!!'' They all shouted. "We wanted you to come this way so we had to lead you here." All afternoon  we played and played till it was dinnertime.

The End

A story by S.S             Please leave a comment Thanks! Bye!!!

16 comments:

Anonymous said...

fantastic!

Anonymous said...

Scary!!!

From IY rm 20

Anonymous said...

very interesting SS!I like the way you described what was all around you! V.S

Anonymous said...

wow i condt belive my eyes when i read that story it was en belive a bell from E.M

Anonymous said...

wow!!!!!!!!

R.L

Anonymous said...

hi!!!

fantastic story.

i thought it was a bit scary don't

you.

eny way wonderful story.

r.l

Anonymous said...

what a wonderful story!E.W.

Anonymous said...

I love your photograph. Where was it taken ?
PNK

Ms L said...

I loved your story. I was quite scared, actually feeling like I was there!

Anonymous said...

wow what a wonderful story. CB Rm20

Anonymous said...

WOW amazing blog but my most favourite thing on the blog was the daily puppy CuTE by l.c

Anonymous said...

LOVE your blog l.c

Anonymous said...

I love your story and the picture. I think this class has fun and awesome kids. RVDM R21

SEH said...

Great story, I love the picture of the tree tunnel as well.

Anonymous said...

wowwww i love it s.s

Anonymous said...

love the tunnel