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Wednesday, April 6, 2011

I Was In A FIRE!!!!!!

In the afternoon I had a nice cup of Milo and then I drew 50 pictures and put them outside by the gate.After I put my pictures by the gate and went inside I saw a very weird knife on the streetlight.The streetlight was so weak that it fell down.Suddenly my nose began to twitch at the smell of suspicious burning flames coming from my family's gate surrounding my house.The fire came closer and closer like a bomb string.My cats ran in the house faster than they have ran in their whole life.I ran as fast as I could to the sink with a bucket.I filled the bucket and ran to the fire and tipped the bucket on the fire.It did not have any effect on it the fire as it was way too big.I went looking for my family in the house and when I found them I warned them  and said there is a fire!!! Get out of the house not out in the garden that's where the fire is coming from.As we ran outside we called 111.                                                                                  STORY MADE BY A.J.

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

FANTASTIC A.J!!!!!!!!

FROM R.L

Anonymous said...

GREAT draft writing A.J. WELL DONE
like all the GREAT ditail from K.D

Anonymous said...

great story!E.W.

Anonymous said...

I love your story about a fire. from R.K.

Ms L said...

What a super story AJ. You have an awesome blog room 23. What great story writers and creative workers you all are!

Anonymous said...

cool story A.J!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by v.s

Anonymous said...

Awesome story AJ.
I.Y rm 20

Anonymous said...

exerlent A.J!!!V.S